Review Detail of Heavenly_Tiger in Gourmet Emperor: Master of Culinary World
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First of all, it sucks that you didn't explain the world more, although yes you explained about the hiearchy system and thats it! You didn't even explain in detail if there is magic or simalr thing! There is a 'identification stone' and the first thing I thought I you would do is make MC learn about this kind of stuff better and the world he got in better but no you write many chapters with MC having s** like wtf dude the title is even culinary but the first thing you focused on is MC and his love interests being intimate not cooking not food and not searching for more information and the MC is an idiot - its okay to tell about business strategies and law and policies to the baron, his father but production of new products, the f*** you should just have the MC make a new company (although the territory is having a crisis roght now they are still a baron they must have savings and such also there is the thing called an investment), this will make the MC and his family prosper more, remeber that the territory is not entirely their own but the kingdom they are in.... If they have a family company they will not just make the family prosper but also the economy of the territory, it will become the specialty of the territory more visitors more people more money and more merchant will invest in the territory for potential and competition.... Also is it quite a norm for MC to check their status first or this MC is just a UNIQUE DUMBA** and the author H****!!! Im excited at first because there is a gourmet novel again for me to read but its just a SE* novel at most in the chapters until now BTW there is another novel using the same character name as this MC with the same type of novel which is gourmet (lol I don't know if this is gourmet because the first 21 chapters but cooking dishes is not even properly mentioned or it is nit ipmentioned even), hope you will improve and also I advise you that upyou get an editor if ever you pursue this nove!!!!!
Gourmet Emperor: Master of Culinary World
Lord_HaarT
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Well, chill out bro, if you let your emotion affect your writing, you'll make a lot of typos. Thanks anyway for whatever you write here, and please let me clarify something first. Who am I anyway? I'm just an unknown author that start writing two months ago, English also not my native language. Please don't expect me writing something like J.R Rowling did and for an unknown author like me, the most important thing is to have readers. The love scene is my way to get it, and I still write it if necessary. Next, some misunderstanding in your view. MC just awaken for two days, do you expect him for suddenly adapted and understand the whole world? second, about territory is not kingdom owned but privately owned as I said like Daimyo in ancient Japan. the owner only sends tribute to the kingdom. third, about having company, didn't I already mention the geography didn't allow big merchant ship to land? who will he make a trade with? the road condition I've written in chapter 26, and if you wait patiently, this trade matter will be settled with MC fiancee father, he will be their sole distributor (spoiler). Forth, about the magic thing and identification stone, I already have the plan about that, just because I'm a slow writer, I just don't like to write it in the early chapter. in the later chapter, MC will meet with Grandmaster magician in Capital after an event, that the magic things start (spoiler) Fifth, MC maids aren't ornament or just *** filler. they will play important roles for MC in the future, that's why their intimacy will be the reason for their loyalty to the MC. Sixth, I'm not intended to finish this story just for hundreds of chapters only, about the Editor, who will willing to edit a story from an unknown author like me? seventh, about the dishes, are you expecting me to write how much salt I pour, how much grams flour I used to cook like that? All I can do is put the link of the recipe that I used in the story at author thought. Do you read Gourmet of another world? in the early chapter the author don't even write how the MC cook, he only describes how the dish look alike.
Lord_HaarT:Well, chill out bro, if you let your emotion affect your writing, you'll make a lot of typos. Thanks anyway for whatever you write here, and please let me clarify something first. Who am I anyway? I'm just an unknown author that start writing two months ago, English also not my native language. Please don't expect me writing something like J.R Rowling did and for an unknown author like me, the most important thing is to have readers. The love scene is my way to get it, and I still write it if necessary. Next, some misunderstanding in your view. MC just awaken for two days, do you expect him for suddenly adapted and understand the whole world? second, about territory is not kingdom owned but privately owned as I said like Daimyo in ancient Japan. the owner only sends tribute to the kingdom. third, about having company, didn't I already mention the geography didn't allow big merchant ship to land? who will he make a trade with? the road condition I've written in chapter 26, and if you wait patiently, this trade matter will be settled with MC fiancee father, he will be their sole distributor (spoiler). Forth, about the magic thing and identification stone, I already have the plan about that, just because I'm a slow writer, I just don't like to write it in the early chapter. in the later chapter, MC will meet with Grandmaster magician in Capital after an event, that the magic things start (spoiler) Fifth, MC maids aren't ornament or just *** filler. they will play important roles for MC in the future, that's why their intimacy will be the reason for their loyalty to the MC. Sixth, I'm not intended to finish this story just for hundreds of chapters only, about the Editor, who will willing to edit a story from an unknown author like me? seventh, about the dishes, are you expecting me to write how much salt I pour, how much grams flour I used to cook like that? All I can do is put the link of the recipe that I used in the story at author thought. Do you read Gourmet of another world? in the early chapter the author don't even write how the MC cook, he only describes how the dish look alike.
