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redstorm321
redstorm321Lv46yr
2018-06-15 13:48

One of the few well done novels done by new authors. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And don't stop with the updates

Saiyan System in the Immortal World

kielreniel
4.1
40 Chs

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NotSomeone
NotSomeoneLv4

Saiyan?! *SCREAMS HARD TO GET STRONGER* HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *12 Episodes leter* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

6yr

Roktah
RoktahLv15

i'm not quite sure about this. he is a saiyan in a cultivation world, which is of course better than being a human and this is not what im concerned about, what i'm concerned about is that the mc is going to use mainly dbz skills, with his first goal being the kamehameha. the thing is that kamehameha and similar skills only work in the dbz universe. there is no way he can charge the kamehameha in the middle of the fight and the immortal cultivators are just going to watch it happen. even if he does fire it, its just too easy to dodge. another thing is that the dbz skills are very ****** skills, gather qi and shoot that stuff out in a straight line most of the time. they cant compare to the diverse skills of the cultivation world with barriers, formations... these are just my concerns regarding the future developement of the story. i'll see how the author plans to resolve these issues and edit my review again at chapter 50, if he gets that far.

6yr
LordOfLaziness
LordOfLazinessLv5

don't give up, i love this novel pleas don't give up ppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

6yr
ReaderKei
ReaderKeiLv6

This sound interesting I hope for more updates 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

6yr
DaoistBlackGold
DaoistBlackGoldLv10

It has a really intresting story and title. I love these types of fanfics please dont drop it. It has awesome potential. Hope you also do daily uploads. Thanks

6yr
Khrams
KhramsLv5

At first, this novel looked like another terribly constructed fan fiction. However, after reading all the current chapters, I am pleasantly surprised. There is a fair bit of logic and reason in every action the main character takes. The plot is well thought out, and the writing quality is among the best I have seen on this website. If you are looking for a good fan fiction, or just a solid novel, I definitely recommend this. However, the update stability is annoyingly slow, especially since this is a novel I personally have been liking so far. However, I understand that the author has their own life, which I respect. Needless to say, when the update stability gets more regular, I will definitely make this at least a 4 star review.

6yr
Hipknow
HipknowLv11

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One of the better quality fanfics hopefully you won’t drop this story since it has great potential. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

6yr
Lucifero
LuciferoLv6

Good story keep it up dont drop It👍👍👍.

6yr
deikatsuo
deikatsuoLv6

I like this novel, Really,

6yr
readeramit
readeramitLv5

Too good . No funky too fast growth. Want supar saiyan fast ,. I hope the villains would be over powered. ..................... ..................

6yr
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