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2020-05-20 14:58

Im back. Gonna read this again. What's up |・ω・`) (〃 ω 〃) (/ω\) (^///^) (*/∇\*)キャ (*´∀`*)えへへ (˶′◡‵˶) ゚.+:。(〃ω〃)゚.+:。 キャァ♪ (〃▽〃)ポッ (//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) テレテレ (/∇\*)…Reaaaally? ・:*:・(*/////∇/////*)・:*:・ Oh you~☆(*´∀`)σ)))))*3゚),・´.、 (つω・*)o(〃・ω・〃)o ・:*:・(●´Д`●)・:*:・ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°) ( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉) ‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧ (*ノωノ)キャー (つ∀<●)゚+.キャァ♪ モジ(((UωU` *)(* ´UωU)))モジ ドキドキ(゚∀゚*)(*゚∀゚)ドキドキ もじ(´pq`*)三(*´pq`)もじ (∩゚∀`∩)キャ―!!!! キャッ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oキャッ♪

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