Review Detail of Auramazda in New Earth- A world of Chaos

for an apocaliptic novel is a bit lacking, for a game novel is quiete good, the writing style is very good and fluid, the character need a little more background and **icological deepness, the world is ending and no one is panicked? No one is riotting even in the game? What do the MC think about the apocalypse? Is better or worse then his previus life? If you can fix this matter it will become a very good novel.