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Viajante
ViajanteLv56yr
2018-07-17 03:12

Summing it up in one word: boring. It has that old formula of speaking the protagonist's past in pieces instead of speaking the vast majority. Because of this, leads to many misunderstandings from readers and of course, my dissatisfaction. It is rare that I like novels with this method and the only one I like, the author uses this feature very softly (Hidden Marks). Until the moment I read it, the story starts with an almost pathetic motive: in the belief of the protagonist's family and her, ML is the only CEO in the world who can help them and then the protagonist needs to pursue him as a sick. It is. Already in the opening chapters, it is shown that the Song Empire is willing to give many actions, benefits, et cetera., just so that the company is saved. If such a story were to fall into my hands, I could end up in a few dozen chapters and cut off that ridiculous inutility, which is just a pretext for dating a handsome, rich, icy man. It would summarize: 1- My brother killed himself, my father is in the hospital, I am incompetent in business, so I look for the frosty executive who is my ex to help me. Because we've already had *** and I've broke with him, he doesn't taked cellphone calls from me. So, i try to convince you through the door-to-door visits in his company. When he rejects me twice, not even listening to my conditions, I give up and look for someone who is minimally able to help my company and give the benefits and actions of the company as payment. 2- When my company recovers minimally from its damages, I know someone interesting, young, beautiful and rich, because in romance novels, always have, as if they were cabbages at the fair. I get to know him better. As always, there is "that pure white lotus" that tries to sabotage me and kill me. I give a legendary super slap in her face or my sweetheart kills her and so we live happy, beautiful and rich. END. But things are not that easy. She will chase him through dozens of chapters and when they finally understand each other, competitors will magically appear because before they understood each other, they did not exist. Kekeke.

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Viajante
ViajanteLv5

Oh heavens, LonelyTree liked my comment! Ohhhhh Good luck with your translation. (whispers: i'm your fan)

Susre
SusreLv5

LOL

Division
DivisionLv4

haha MC is so shameless

minklyn
minklynLv4

hahahaha

Huepute
HueputeLv2

MC seem really stupid :(

pinkflash
pinkflashLv2

What to he **** you doing revale the story

Deebah
DeebahLv5

Lack of communication is a very big blow on a relationship

Viajante
ViajanteLv5

Please, you stop to answer my review. I was so young, i was a rookie on this page and i was very angry to vote every day to a bad written thing 😭

Neko31264
Neko31264Lv3

LOL

Neko31264
Neko31264Lv3

LOL

kellyrom
kellyromLv4

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 thnks for the summary.. i was already very unsure whether to read this one because the synopsis. Why do many novels here tries to romanticized rape🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️. I will definitely not read this now.👍👍👍

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