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Darkjokes

Darkjokes

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2017-09-17 加入United Kingdom
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  • Darkjokes
    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    A new book but its a fun read. Lia is also a great character. Love the pacing aswell. Not too fast and not too slow. Great work overall. Looking forward to Lia developing as a character :)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    Great cover, first of all, love it. The novel is a pretty fun read as well. System novels are rarely well done but this ones really interesting. Fantastic work on grammar as well. Hope to see more of it in the future :)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    Such a great novel. I've read a couple of thriller novels but this ones so interesting. The first two chapters were like watching one of the documentaries on a serial killer. I highly suggest this novel to anyone who likes thriller and suspense.

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    The two chapters I've read, I've not seen any grammatical errors. It's really well written. The way you set it up was great as well. It felt like I was watching a movie or a show. The transitions from one scene to the next is very fluid as well. Looking forward to more chapters :)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    A novel about demons is always an interesting one. I liked how you set up the first fight and how the main character was introduced. The grammar is pretty good as well. You've done really well for English not being your native language. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more updates :)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    Great First chapter. Little to no grammatical errors. A novel about vampires is always am interesting one. I like how you have described things in detail as well. Looking forward for more chapters :)

  • Darkjokes
    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    Its quite an interesting read. A tale of two fairies. Its not unheard of but this is quite a fresh take on the fantasy genre. I've seen little to no grammatical errors. Looking forward to more:)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    I must say you know your way around words. It has little to not grammatical errors. The plot is quite fresh aswell. It already had me hooked from the first chapter. I love novels that describe every detail of some horrible incident that has happened. I love the main character as well. Different from most skirt chasing characters. Quite well done and I hope to see more in the future:)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    I've read up to chapter 7 and so far everything is good. I dont usually read past chapter 5 but this has some really interesting premise. It doesn't beat around the Bush and gets straight to the focal point of the action. Grammar seems to be pretty good as well. Overall a very interesting premise for a novel. Hope to see more of it in the future :)

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    Darkjokes4 years ago
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    Quite beautifully written even for a new writer. Wasn't expecting much as I've read a couple of romance novels and never been a fan of it but this one hit different. The way you described brown colour like that was beautiful. This is a fresh take on romance and and its quite refreshing. Looking forward to future updates :)