JohnnieWalker

heresy

...terrible "writer"

MC never moves the damm plot is always passive in moving it, nothing rly changes utterly boring with an ok idea... skipping it.........................

MC is beta thru and thru,, why people like to read this crap. lots of grammars issues. try again....................... mediocre at best, lame

Habzone HL-18-66, also known as "The Torrent,

Author is edgy af, seems like NA virgin sheltered folks.

If you into watching everyone else besidesz the mc get some. Also wasnt a good mashup. Mediocre, feels like a eilion fake hope mc doesnt turn shota out of nowhere

Some failfic authors get off on that, so you get that.. plus the theme is a hodge podge mishmash of a mess

Mediocre, -Keeps interchanging the dam mc name -Annoying talking system -Demon giving powers -Edgy backstory teenager wet dream, boohoo im Killah #pow -Edgy teenage power set -Tried to monetize the worst way, showing way the fandom hate this types of people -don't be eluded by chapter count is more like a 1/3 real chapter sizes All in all waste of time, feel bad for people who paid for this. Guess this site is rly dying