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Not really, you need to be detailed because the spirit of the relic will give you exactly what you asked but you dont need to understand it. so if you ask something like, make a restraint similar to this chain, and it must be able to stop magic from working immediately with no side effect to human or faunus. how it will stop the magic is up to the creativity of the spirit. the spirit will give you that and will add a touch of creativity. For example, it will make salem sleep or something.
Raven is forgiven but still treated with some alienation. This aligns with RWBY cast and the show behavior. For Crimson, it is because he views her as a less extreme version of himself. This will make more sense later on.
You bring a good point, I updated it accordingly. Thank you for the suggestion.
Honestly, I was surprised to see a discussion about the synopsis of all things. So, allow me to add my two cents. Book synopses exist to give readers a quick overview of the story, helping them decide whether they want to read it. I think we can all agree on that point. Now, this fanfic is aimed at those who have read Demon Slayer's manga and are familiar with RWBY. It was intentionally written in a way that skips explanations and plot details. So, if you're unfamiliar with both—especially RWBY—the events might be confusing. With that in mind, the synopsis here literally outlines the story and sets expectations from start to finish. It serves its purpose without issue. As for writing a review without reading the actual content—is that okay? Sure, judging a book by its cover is a common practice. Personally, I see the review as more of a complaint—dismissive and unhelpful. But beyond that, it's fine.
I’ll admit it, when I wrote this chapter, I was conflicted. To put it bluntly, the characters are pretty dumb in the show, and I can't imagine them asking proper questions. This kind of contradicts my attempt to keep their behavior true to the source.
it is not stated out right, but in Qrow's song 'bad luck charm' there is a mention of the burden of his name. one interpation was this. It made more sense to me than Tai being the father
thanks, fixed
spoiler: dead? no. will she die? yes. is it going to be soon? yes
The premise is a good one, but the execution is horrendous to say the least. The chapters feel like 200 words that went through one of the most obnoxious text infiltrators that I have seen.