JustDK

Yeah, i used to use coins for this story, but i realized since college he was getting nerfed or injured just to keep him from winning just because he was already to good and they needed to save him for the majors. made the story really boring to read.

+1

So many plot holes just to stay in Korea securities. Did the father completely forget about the mail from the USA stating he profited 300m+ money.... and now he's estimating 1/3 of that amount.....

This seems so forced... lost alot of interest to continue reading from this chapter.

Not sure if this is correct, but it's initial was 100m. with 10x leverage he was playing with 1.0b worth. winnings of 31% of 1.0b would be 310m so I think that's where the number came from.

Bad choice for the first movie..... I understand it's a cheap movie to make and makes for easier integration into the director role, but as a reader, and knowing absolutely nothing about this movie makes it boring to read. Added in, it's your first movie, and it'll probably take like 20 chapters to even release or longer probably, just makes for a bad choice and lost of interest.

really did* gain..... typo not suppose to be didn't.

I kinda disagree. I think it's unexpected, but in a way, it shows that Zabo really didn't gain something supernatural from his reincarnation. It's been mentioned countless time how he's a freak of nature with how quickly he works and makes games, this reveal kinda finally shows he got more out of his reincarnation then just memories.

You should just delete this chapter and not even mention anything about the Olympics. I find it hard to continue this story with how stupid the decision is. Like he's a businessman, he's a wwe fan, he should know that being famous is a brand onto itself and will immensely help his future WWE career. it's already 2008, summer Olympics is literally happening ASAP so it's not even a significant time investment in comparison to the fame it will bring and help his career. to decline it is absolutely ridiculous and kills any momentum and immersion this story had going on.

That's a brilliant suggestion. I would read. Or even yet.... Makes it an SI sequel. Kyle's next life. We need more Kyle.