JustDK

Was hoping this story would be different, but at the end of the day, it's always the mutant agenda. So dang over used.

Such a bad chapter. Kills any smart characterization of the Mc you had going.

Starting to get bored of this arc. Author said Altera has plot armor and no one else, but Fargo seems to have just as much plot armor right now, and dumbing down everyone else just to make Altera look better. Not a good way to cause drama imo. Regret using my golden tickets now, story going way downhill with arc.

I hope he can somehow play. I doubt it though.... since it's only his first year, be too soon to win the championship. But if he did win, his legend status would be so much higher.

Such a bad first chapter. MC constantly contradicts himself....

It's not just this chapter. Last several chapters are all full of typos and quality got alot worst. Kinda sad when these are the paying chapters to.

The quality of the chapters seem to be going down lately. Alot of small errors like calling Charlie him and his constantly. Need an editor or to just proof read the chapters....

The story is good.... but the synopsis doesn't really match with this. I thought he was going to be a peaceful farmer away from the strife... yet 18 chapters in and he's already fighting for his life. doesn't seem to match the synopsis at all. I mean going into town with alot of loot when a war is about to break out.... what did you expect?

Yeah.... I came here for a good baseball story, not this cheap Chinese knockoff blackmail. disappointing .