Lord_lucky

it's your fault mostly, you self insert yourself with the characters and make it personal so you end up making the mc overpowerd, and another thing all your stories read the same, the characters think the same. you make them think too much and spouting half baked philosophical words. to become a better writer you need to change and not stick to the same thing for example: write an oc insert and put a wall between you and the character, and believe as long as you don't insert yourself in the character you won't have the problem of making the character op

It is very good the chapter update every day but i have to complain about the length it could have been better, but it's fine. ..........................

wtf ?? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14239073/1/Prytaneum-DanMachi-and-Percy-Jackson-crossover this is the original it's not cool to steal other people's work and add patreon

this is stupid, meet a rtwo year old and now your whole life revolves around him?

must be the work of uchiggers

you forgot the boss of the 27th floor Amphisbaena it is stupid to go directly to the 37th

Sigh... this is going downhill.

oh didn't read that, thanks man.

btw man someone has been posting your novel under a different name

This is going downhill.