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I love the concept of the story. I also love how it started great along with the next chapters. Plus, the characters are pretty interesting too. Overall, this was a fun read for me. Hope u finish this till the last chapter author san.

It started great and the flow of the story so far is great too. I love the concept and the characters. hope u finish this till the end author san!!

The was start was good along with the few chapters. The mc is kind of interesting and the flow of the story is great so far. Hope u finish cuz it's worth reading.

The characters here are pretty interesting. The story and how it's progressing so far is great. It was well written too. Hope u finish this author san.

First of all, I like the story and how its progressing so far. It also started interesting along with the other chapters. This just needs a little editing. Overall this was a good read for me.

The start was great and every chapter is interesting. So far the flow of the story is great too. This just needs a little editing and everything's good.

For starters, this was an interesting read for me. I like how the story is progressing and the concept u chose for this too. This just needs a little editing and everything is perfect.

the story is interesting and the flow of it so far is good. the characters here are interesting too 😆 keep up the good work. Hope to see the rest.

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It was a good read. the first part definitely caught me off guard tho so it was interesting and fun overall for me. 😆 keep up the good work author san!