Jolliemari

Wooow is she finally dead 💃🏻 i do wish so thats so annoying the la Tes T chapters gave me such depression of all the wrongs going on my heart cant take it anymore 💔

Why are you stopping the daily update we kinda forgot the story by the time you add one chapter or two which holds no actual update in the events and just keep us froze jn the scene !!!🥲

Your chapters uploaded after the 122 does not appear !!! Why cant we see it to continue reading your updates

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Wish to see more frequent updates and massive contents release

The story was poorly written the sequence of achtions and chapters moving from ine storyline to the next is week and confusing. Charectures selected names are complicated and hard to keep reading and memorizing. The details of the story confuses you rather than helping you to picture the scene. Extendig chapters for no need, jumping chapters to reach something interested, sex rated scenes are poorely described not link to any visualization to stimulate and non understandable, even the ending is unattached to the story line. I felt nothing from this story wish your new attempts are more skilled and focuse written. Good luck in it

The story was poorly written the sequence of achtions and chapters moving from ine storyline to the next is week and confusing. Charectures selected names are complicated and hard to keep reading and memorizing. The details of the story confuses you rather than helping you to picture the scene. Extendig chapters for no need, jumping chapters to reach something interested, sex rated scenes are poorely described not link to any visualization to stimulate and non understandable, even the ending is unattached to the story line. I felt nothing from this story wish your new attempts are more skilled and focuse written. Good luck in it

What happened to the updates and the story its been over a month of your come back date 🥺

Omg i kinda forget about the last chapters read and story sequence as it was not updated for so long 🥺 and now having only one chapter out of two appearing and no more frequent updates is frustrating to 💔 i need to finish the novel before i forget all about it🫥🙏🏻