Kantum

I dislike these moments where the characters that should clearly catch these obvious hints suddenly lose all their brain capacity. Not only does she know that she is in this novel world but she also knew about “reincarnators” from previous novels from her past life. Thats an instant giveaway and the mc just had a void in her brain. Also the heroine saying that is also retarded. Maybe insert the fact that you are implying she is a reincarnator by using an inner-monologue. That should not dumb down the whole novel by a lot..

Author

God damn this is one of the most frustrating reads ever. It starts decently, not anything special but still gets you interested in the warm characters. Decent explanations of the cultivation system of this world, items, beast and so on (the usual). And then the author goes on a rampage of chapters full of r*apists. Totally weird, bland and full of npc dialogue. I can have a very high tolerance to this kind of bullshit in cultivation novels, especially yuri’s but goddamn this went full trash after she gets out of the subspace. Delete this please and go to a psychologist, author…

Bruh you ruined it What is in your mind author? You only wrote about r*apists these past chapters. You explain the cultivation system properly, create some warm and interesting characters, grading systems and so on just to write about creeps afterwards, constanly. You can do it once or even a few times throught your novel to paint this misoginistic and dark world but doing it constantly just wrecks everything imo. And the dialogue is so bland and braindead it hurts.

Bruh, cultivation worlds full of r*pists are booring and overused. 3 chapters full of r*pists already. I get that cultivation worlds are a breeding ground for these maggots but building a world full of these clichee encounters is an expired concept…

Ah yes This old master still remembers his golden core tirbulation The heavens were roaring with fury but my will was indomitable She is a good seedling, this master shall service her with some heavenly tea when she ascends to a higher existence

Aight, I tried so hard to like this d/t the concept but this is so fucking bad it acutally hurts

Npc ah comment

Fax! And that bitch just reffered to her brother as “that” and she didn’t say shit. If someone refers to my family as “that”, they about to be clapped