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What are you talking about? Riser literally stole Issei's mother and prevented him from being born by impregnating her. Now, Miki is planning on joining with her daughter to seduce Riser, who is her own father... Wow, that's disgusting.

I am surprised that such a disgusting fanfic managed to score so high. It is just another generic harem and god complex fanfic with no creativity, generic, one-sided and self-centred as hell. It is super childish and reads as if it was written by a child author.

They named a boy Vivian?!

I'm wondering if the main character will only attract girls who are already yandere from the start, or if he has the ability to turn normal girls into yanderes.

What can I say? It looks like haters gonna hate. This idea actually uses the original protagonist to full potential instead of wasting him, so I kind of like it.

Yeah, you know the drill - it's another story where the protagonist helps Rias, bashes Issei, kills him, and then steals the Boosted Gear. It's all so predictable.

I think Mc isn't the sanest person in the first place, the dude is insane.

This fanfic is full of overused, cringe-worthy self-insert tropes, lacking originality. The important male characters have been changed into female characters to simply add to the author's harem. Those male characters who remain either end up dying in a VERY tragic manner or serve as the main character's minions. It's clear that the author doesn't prioritize coherent storytelling and instead focuses on adding characters to the harem under predictable and simplistic circumstances. The character deaths are portrayed in a tasteless manner, making the overall story a disappointment."

He comes to Kuoh city for a second time? Is he come here before?

I don't mean to offend you, but I am also studying English on my own. However, your English is a bit broken to the point that I don't understand some of your sentences.