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nah

Bro, add some pictures. Your novel, your original work, but you are too lazy to add a single picture. Add some pics here (webnovel) to make it more popular.

Author, I don't have a question voucher, but please give me or tell me if there is a Discord link for this novel? LOllllll

Oh, I thought it's temporary and when they come out they will be normal again.

So, where are Kai and everyone else? Are they seeing this or not? I’m not sure what to think or how to picture this in my mind while reading! AUTHOR

She’s grown? She actually aged? So it’s not an illusion where everyone fought. They spent numerous years there?

She deserves it

Pub... LICK? / Public

Author, your story is engaging, but there are a few areas that need attention. Specifically, there are some grammatical issues that I would rate as a 3 out of 10 in severity. Additionally, there are inconsistencies in the use of gender-specific pronouns; 'he' is sometimes used when 'she' is correct, and vice versa. Addressing these issues could elevate your story to a perfect 10 out of 10.