EdgingSystem

rewrite?

The beginning starts off rough, but after a while the story gets very good. The Character design is probably the best part, the story is interesting. Highly recommend the author re-write the first few chapters, this story has high potential!

The earlier chapters are a bit confusing but action packed nonetheless, the mystery aspect alone is a great reason to read this novel. Its not a novel i would read but its definitely something the readers of webnovel would enjoy.

Dharampal is a life changing piece of literature, when Dharampal said "This has truly been our Dharampal" I cried and screamed in joy. I need a prequel series, a sequel series, a spin-off series and a cinematic universe!!!

Peak fiction, if its fights you want, this has it, mystery? this has it. the story unfolds from one event to another really smoothly. The story can get a bit confusing at times but that doesn't stop it from being absolute peak.

how bro felt after saying that

chat is this rizz?

guys is it ever mentioned in the novel that he has 500 years of experience????

bro thinks he's ichigo kurosaki

honestly if every gu refinement scene was a struggle and battle between a 500 yr old and a insect i don't think i would read this. it's better for the actual hard work of his previous life carry on and help him then it just being a reset+knowledge.