must_stop_reading

haunting yet beautiful or hauntingly beautiful

caught in the crosshair or killed in the crossfire

so...first 2 chapters are like reading a textbook. If I need to remember any of this to enjoy the novel, this is not going to work out. This should be at the back of the book as some sort of index reference type of thing (can't remember the proper word!) You're losing your audience with this info overload.

phoenix tree?? I thought he was in a Chinese Parasol tree?? The AI really needs to keep its story straight ffs

had been burned, or was burnt. was burned is incorrect grammar - IYGAS 😂

the fact I wasted my time reading this trash up to this point. the jokes'son me. Im out

incorrect the expression is "MORE (to the situation) than meets the eye"

this won an award? for real? like in English? The premise is great, don't get me wrong but man, this is a hard slog trying to read.

SMH

thought his skill was copying curses. he is copying curses. ergo, he CAN use his skill [img=In your face]