FallenMoon3

Famous Review from the Author Anyway, this is a cultivation adventure with action and some mysteries. Many people have enjoyed it, so maybe you will too. The story focuses on the protagonist's evolution in power and as a person, as he travels to many places and faces numerous challenges. There are various countries in the protagonist's world inspired by different societies and cultures from our world and several other fantasy worlds. This universe also includes multiple dimensions with distinct races (Elves, beasts, demons, dragons, deities...), and, of course, the MC will have to face them all in his journey to achieve his goals. Style: Strongly inspired by European medieval fantasy and Xianxia stories.

Of course, feedback, criticism, all of this helps me to improve, if there is something you didn't like, you can let me know.

It was good, you write well and managed to correctly emphasize the characters' feelings and emotions. I think you have potential.

Good writing, has potential. OP protagonist is not my style but there may be exceptions

Good start, it looks promising, you can see that the author already has a lot of things planned

It's not really my style, but I found it interesting, it looks promising. Good Luck

Interesting and has potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the protagonist will progress in this world.

Hey brother writer! I'm a beginner writer, but after reading a few chapters, I decided to give you a tip. Some paragraphs were a little too long, which can be a bit annoying, so trying to keep the paragraph lengths similar might be a good idea. As for the rest, I found the story promising and interesting. And if you like cultivation and fantasy, check out my novel. Good luck

The structure of the writing is well developed, the characters act naturally, and the story's proposal is peculiar and innovative. And from what was presented of the world we can see that there is still a lot to come.

I think your writing is really good. If you have good world-building and power development planned, you'll probably go far. The "genius" tag usually concerns me; are you planning to make an OP MC? Oh, and if you could review my book, I would appreciate it. I'm just starting out.