MR_Ronin
寫作
閱讀
254
閱讀作品
MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 Sasha_ReaperWell, I could have spun the plot very quickly and finished it quickly, but I like long stories like "Lord of Mysterious" and I always felt that without a long plot, it is difficult to get into the work. Maybe I am wrong.
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 ABIN_GAMING
It depends on how you look at it. Right now he's weaker than the original Yuta, but he could potentially be stronger than Yuta at the end of the manga.
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 blue_cookie24
Where are you from?
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 DaoistweGC2E
Now everything is fine, you can take a look
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 Lan_Still
I fixed it
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 Demonwolf07
Thank you very much for the good rating and constructive criticism. As for the presentation of the plot and dialogues, I think you are right, I will work on this, I have already thought out the plot completely , just need to write it well. And thanks again.[img=Feeling it]
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 notlair
Well, I'm a very hardworking person, I think it's very noticeable.
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 MrsNameNecessary
Hello
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 lord_of_Wright
Yes, I corrected that passage. Thanks for your comment. [img=Smug][img=More pls][img=More pls]
- MR_Ronin3 months ago回復 ZDK_Dino
I'll correct it, it's just that in anime in my language they were called both this and that
