Benefic

Get the whole story on FanFiction. This is copied from an old unfinished story called ‘I Still Haven’t Found What I’m Looking For’.

Based on context clues I’m assuming this a version of Master of Death Harry. So immortal. Either got bored of Earth and went through the veil, or world ending event. Also this isn’t the original. The original version of this story is on FanFiction.net. This is just a copy.

Thruple. No harem, but allows developed feelings between all three in the relationship.

I really hope you decide to come back to this story when you have time. I began reading it when you first posted it on FF.net and was impressed. I came here to see if maybe you discontinued it on there. It’s one of my personal favorites. Very well developed characters when accounting for the quicker pace of the story. The pairing is interesting and it’s developed well (again taking into account the faster pace of the story). The interactions don’t feel forced or rushed. All in all, a nicely paced and well developed story. Here’s to hoping you continue.

There are not many Fanfics that feature NCIS. The few that are almost never have an OC as a main character, which I think is the best option when writing an NCIS Fanfic. This is very well done. I hope the updates stay consistent because this is a lot of potential. Thank you for your work.