ShadowAssassin1

+1

is he going alone? think you should bring someone with him to help out, maybe Stussy if not then Marco who can fly and heal if anyone injured,

true but he could pick him up, not much garp can do about it and probalby be accepting as he took rogers body and they have relationship

maybe adopt ace and robin, they would make one hell of a duo, greta brother and sister dynamic if not relationship

it sounds cool i just wonder if there is need for Luffy, because if he is to be involbed i feel the story needs to be passive to not have things change for him to be make his debu and become pirates, i think storywise it would far less limiting on how its to progress if the story ends before luffy sets out. He can still be pirate/adventurer

rare to find author who listenns, much respect. Is MC going to be the one lead world to freedom of such or will it be Luffy, because ifs Luffy then i dont see how much you can do with the story since the path ahve be be pawed for him

this went from best story to boring, after everything there are no butterfly effect, when you beat up kuzan and sakazuki there were no consequenses because they just made 100% recovery even with missing limbs

PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn so far this sooo gooood.............................................................................................................................

YESS finally a fanfic where the phoenix fruit main focus, i always tought with strong haki its the most OP ...................................