7_Olives_7

I've changed up some aspects based on your past comment, where I understood some instances might be hard to register who is talking. Though it seems i'ved miss some, any tips for improvement?

I wasn't sure about the demon/monsters part myself but I checked the manga, (My source material.) and it's demons. Haven't read the novel in a bit, so if it's different there don't mind it too much.

Maybe maybe, who knows.

Probably a good idea, I'm really just messing around trying to figure out the best way for dialogue lol.