Homeless_Author

Happy New Year to you too 🎉 Five chapters coming up tomorrow and more to come. Let me try my hand at a New Year's mass release programme

I never saw myself as some great author tbh; just enjoying myself. I really take it as a compliment you even see me as an author, even if it's a mediocre one. Also, didn't you comment on the book being too cliche but now sound pissed it's not a cliche system book...? Lastly, it's just how I wanted it to be. it's a system that brought the MC from the dead twice; it's not an angel. It did so with intentions and all it cares about is to have those intentions fulfilled.

The paragraph literally agrees with you. It blatantly states that Lucas doesn't want to leave the store until he gets stronger. However, that has nothing to do with the system. There's a comment in this same chapter that mentions it. The system isn't designed to be the MC's best buddy; there was the foreshadowing in the synopsis page.

If you read latter chapters, you'll find out MC is in the backwater part of galaxy. Even in developed countries, there are places without internet access or good medical facilities. Same logic.

Brit

no problem.

Thanks a lot~

Thanks! Noted. I'll try my best but please bear with it for now. It's a new location so I want to settle the background info on everything now 😅

😅 Well, at face value, it looks that way, but this chapter was actually meant to have a deeper meaning. You could even say it's a spoiler.

Also, there isn't any plot armour. Every battle the MC has fought was done with logic. I endeavour to explain how he wins after most of the battles, so no one would think it's plot armour. But I'll take the advice of building more tension. In later chapters, there's a bit more focus on other characters, but I try not to overdo it cause some readers don't seem to like that. Finally, there's quite a lot of divergence in story and actually less cliche lines. But I will work better to ensure that such a misunderstanding doesn't occur.