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Yes, grow up. They complained in the past, which I fixed already. You didn't even read the next sentence and complained a lot :) When I checked your profile, you just nitpick everything other authors write as well, as if you're the god of writers. As I said, if you don't like it just stop. If you want something you like, just write it yourself, easy no? Stop nitpicking something that's not wrong. You just want to find someone's fault and disturb them at this point. Grow up.
I don't care about your opinion. As the reader below me said, all description is in past tense. And there is nothing that say "Oh, it's not allowed to regain memories at 18 years old even when he reborn as baby and remember all that now!" Just grow up, dude. I write this because I want to satisfy myself, not someone like you.
bro be like: I don't like it, rewrite it. Just know it's a description, just a mention, a quote. Never in the paragraph it's mentioned he's reborn as a baby. It's only mentioned he regained his past life memories a day before graduation. Description and inner monologue is different. And it's clearly mentioned in that paragraph that 'transmigration itself is strange, even if he's not reborn as a baby.' If you don't like my writing style, just don't read it. I am not forcing you or whatever. It's also not an airport where you need to announce when you leave. Call me arrogant or whatever, I don't care. It's what I wanted to write, thank you.
It's never mentioned he reborn as a 'baby'. It's just an exposition
thank you. fixed
People always say it's nerf without even understanding it :) There is no nerf at all. Please differentiate between 'monologue' and description. MC don't know 'everything'.
It's still early in the fic, wait until you read more
Toga only joined the league after the Stain incident. She's not supposed to join this fast
Real name. He acted as if Toga is an alias she used around like him using Nurarihyon alias
He regained memories a day prior the graduation and find Izuku on the beach.