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I have two questions, the #revenge tag, what does he want to get revenge on, the guys from the first chapter or on all those guys who are similar to those guys? Hero style? Another thing, you said that you wanted Tory as a romantic interest, does that mean that he won't see it? Like, I don't know if the story is suitable for a romance or at least not early on, at least make it a Playboy so people don't bother you with comments.
I will translate it with Google hehe::: 5/2/2/4/3 For the translator nothing to criticize, Few grammatical errors, but my problem is with the story there are many errors with the dates, the personalities of the characters, things that Kakashi does with the flying thunder, Rin possibly falls in love with Obito, mc pretends to be weak when he already shows that he is strong. That is what I got to see as far as I read it (I probably dropped it). Things I like: mc and Obito's friendship, the system, the comedy is not the best but it is there. and some things that I forgot.
Can someone tell me how to comment on paragraphs?