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Point being, it may be haruno, yukino, even yumika for the fact. The authors being purposely vague about that, as it was not a plot point. And, the hayama thing was there as the author might wanted to show his jealous side, there is absolutely nothing more to it.

I don't know, but these chapter made me conflicted a bit, Yukino and Yui seemed unnaturally close, in novel they are close, but here yukino failed to call out on yui. you called that red flag on these sentiment or, due to the jinxing statement.

It's a bit out of character, Yukino never shied away from calling yui out, here you are desperately trying to make Yui a Mary Sue or something.

Thought I think you are taking the clinginess a bit much. As for Hachiman and Yukino you did a good job on portraying their developing relationship.

you know, friends are friends and other relationship are there too. only in movies and animes friends are clingy like this. As this too a piece of fiction.

completely in line with her character. She tends to memorize everyone's name and faces yet she forgets Zaimokuza, etc. Thought it's more of a comedic relief, I like the fact that you bring some little details like this in this story. TFTC.

An official continuation, honestly that series contains only 6 short vol, released with season 3 bundles, with lot of character regression. Atleast it has some good hachiyuki moments.

*girly

may be you tried to say 'couldn't '

I like this details here, Yukino showed a lot of her girls side in shin series(despite it being a trash, it has good parts). Most of the viewers don't know that. spoiler. It's similar to the manicure she done to impress him.