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pantserplotter2 months ago回復 ShatteredQueen_LWGrest well my child.....
- pantserplotter2 months ago發表
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
- pantserplotter2 months ago發表
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
- pantserplotter2 months ago發表
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
- pantserplotter3 months ago發表
Rereading this again, it was by far so far so good. Emotions reflected well and I was emotional a bit and pitied the MC. A very dramatic plot and mixed with System and plot progression. Good read perfect to pass time 😊
- pantserplotter3 months ago發表
it is indeed interesting...... I read it and I already knew this was contracted. with it's quality and content. I had good time reading it, and the characters behave like of an anime...I can already see it like that. Kudos author!
- pantserplotter3 months ago發表
No wonder it got a contract..... it's good! Though there's still room for improvement. Learn more and more power to your writings. I can say the author is above the average and better than most. Kudos for a job well done.
- pantserplotter3 months ago回復 Demigod_of_All
awieee thanks demi!
- pantserplotter3 months ago發表
5 stars for the effort of the author. The story is good but it could be better with edits. Flow and narration, pacing too. All in all good luck, learn from what I told you okay? 😉
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