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DT_Ade

DT_Ade

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2024-04-21 加入Global
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    DT_Ade19 hours ago
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    The characterizations of the characters, their interactions as well as the surrounding environment are written really well. Each character has their own distinctive trait and I'm sure that going forward we will be able to dig even deeper into their stories. The world building is still lacking but some clues such as the monopoly of the kingdom, the oriental lineage in only one part of the world or even the underground cities show that ideas from that point of view are not lacking. Perhaps the only flaw at the moment is the slow progression of the MC because even if we are only on his 8th day in the new world in the novel we are at more than 170 chapters and he still hasn't unlocked his unique class. I hope he gets a big power up soon. For the rest, I recommend the work to all lovers of the Isekai genre in general because it gives me the impression that it will be a truly good story. Good luck author!

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    DT_Ade5 days ago
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    Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.

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    DT_Ade3 months ago
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    I'll start by saying that if you are undecided whether or not to start reading I highly recommend doing so given that the first 750-1000 chapters are 5 stars full. As far as I'm concerned this novel reached its peak the moment of marriage with all his wives. From there the introduction of Vyriana ruined everything...The MC became a simp for the dragon and started doing practically everything she asked of him, leading to behaviors that don't belong to him in the slightest and which go in direct contrast with his nature as a be cautious and protect his wives such as when he insults the incomplete divine cultivators or humiliates the 7 heroes on Vyriana's orders causing the wrath of the dragon lord who will try to kidnap Skyla or attack the state of Lust. From then on he seems more and more dragged like the challenge with Vyriana or the fact that all his wives have already managed to reach their own law and have broken through into the saint even just by understanding their "path" while he (spoilers of the last chapters that I read from someone) after coming out of the illusion he is still a semi-saint even after finding his "path" which should be very strong (perhaps the strongest). I've read a lot of similar thoughts and to many it seems "dragged" which is leading to a lot of inconsistencies. I think it can be picked up again as the characters and world building are truly some of the best I've read if they were 5 stars before I would now give 3 so a 4 for the complete work (at this point). I repeat, I still recommend everyone to start it if you haven't done so because it's really worth it if you are a lover of the genre.

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    DT_Ade4 months ago
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    I can definitely see a lot of potential in the novel but right now I just can't stand the mc. I will pause reading and wait for the MC's progress hoping it isn't too slow... I advise everyone who feels like me not to drop the novel permanently but leave it for future reading because it will surely be a masterpiece. I leave 4 stars as a good omen, ready to give 5 in the future ... Good luck to the author

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    DT_Ade4 months ago
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    By far one of the best novels I've ever read. A piece of advice: there will be many times that the mc will not make the right choice but he will improve each time by understanding his mistakes.

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    DT_Ade4 months ago
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    I'll start by saying that the potential of this novel for lovers of the "OP", "R-18", "Harem", "AntiHero" genre could be 5 but at this moment the real rating is definitely a 3. I feel like leaving 4 hoping for an improvement. Personally I find the writing excellent, the world is large (4 continents, more worlds and probably Gods) so a lot of material for the future, the updating of the chapters is stable therefore excellent in these 3 aspects. The critical parts are the story and especially the MC. Let me explain better... The focal point is the mc's goal which is to dominate the world and find a way to travel to his old world probably for revenge however his whole being goes against this. In a world where beyond magic and swordsmanship, a person's unique ability defines true strength, the mc is (arguably) at the peak of both as well as having more skills thanks to intimate relationships with women. Now, his behavior in relationships and his desire not to force "dominance" is not the problem since he is already the strongest even without skills, in fact it is perhaps his only positive side. Let me explain: 1) The mc is stupid, incredibly stupid and with no desire to improve. Example: Amon creates the smartphone but he never thinks of implementing spy systems inside it (for someone who wants to dominate the information is fundamental I think). Gabrielle offers him information about Normann especially his strength but he sends Sandra who is not exactly very strong to keep an eye on him resulting in Martha's death. These are just 2 examples of its lightness and passivity but there are many more... 2) He has a creation ability but the only spells created are "Levitation" and "Illusion" then after Martha's death he creates "Resurrection"... Now you can create "Resurrection" and you never thought of creating spells as control or mind reading, enslaving, tracking and many others that surely escape me at the moment. Magic that he could have used on boring characters like Shredica, Lilia, Gaspard and others who surely escape me instead of saying "yes I'm a dog I'll do as you want"... The fact of remaining in the shadows in the academy is not absolutely wrong but for someone who wants to dominate the world and has every chance of doing so should be dominant when needed... 3) Mc plays when he is not needed... You are the strongest, why prolong the fights with Normann or Sara when in the end you demonstrate that you can subdue them in a few seconds with overwhelming force? He didn't even have to hide from anyone at that time. 4) The mc does not progress in his behavior even after events such as Martha's death which could have been a turning point in his character... He remains stupid and passive. Now I'm in the last chapters and Moriarty who underestimated how all the people he meets blackmail him by putting the safety of the people dear to him at risk... I hope that finally there is a change in his way of being and above all I hope that he isn't stupid enough to not understand that Marie ( the only woman who hasn't shown interest in him) is the spy. In essence, if Leon progresses and stops playing there are all the conditions for a great continuation. Just my personal opinion, I wish the author good luck.