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To be honest, the book is not bad, but it is too fast and hasty, the dialogues are strange, as if two robots are communicating, and some things are completely incomprehensible.

A good start and the book itself is also interesting, although it is similar to the author's previous books, but I liked them all, I hope the author will not give up on this and continue writing

It's very cool that you accept criticism. Since it will help you a lot in promoting your product. But the book is not bad and, I would even say, close to excellent.

An interesting idea, although it is almost completely removed from the shadow slave, but I will not condemn it. The only thing is a lot of awards to the hero.

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Great book. The author really tried and gave it a good direction along with huge potential. But the most important thing is that there is no harem and even if there is love, the book is still great. Moderately cruel and moderately kind, in my opinion she is very good.

At least someone reasonable stayed on this platform, I'm glad you share my opinion! I totally agree that a harem is for the underdeveloped. It's a pity that the author didn't specify the tag, I wouldn't even read this garbage.

The book caused me mixed feelings. On the one hand, I liked it, but on the other, not everything. I didn't find Nefis's character the most interesting, so I chose Cassie over her. I also didn't like how Sonny turned into a henpecked man. The rest of the book is fascinating to read, but after chapter 7, Sunny finally becomes an idiot in love. It's not a bad idea, but Nefis ruins everything. And since I don't want to impose my opinion on you, then write as you see fit.

At least someone reasonable stayed on this platform, I'm glad you share my opinion! I totally agree that a harem is for the underdeveloped. It's a pity that the author didn't specify the tag, I wouldn't even read this garbage.

very good like for your efforts, I hope you will succeed, do not stop writing or translating at the expense of this I did not really understand.