Dr_Pumpkin

*and let's not forget why MC and his enemies their abilities functions*

Firstly, write a decent synopsis! Honestly when i read it, i felt confused and everything is too “chinese” which is not well accepted in fanfictions, there's sentences such as courth death! and other things that has no logic! I'm not gonna lie the translator is good but the story is just bad. and translator I'm gonna recommend you to change the name to japanese or English not “chinese” since it makes no sense to have it in a marvel and Naruto fanfiction And pain is too stupid chapter 2 to say what naraka paths abilitys are even if the mc already knew he shouldnt have said that and even the mc tells his zankaputos abilities to his enemies? Is he stupid? And let's not forget the story 2 chapters in already shows Tsunade to have a “saving the beauty scene” which obviously is too early and why would Tsunade be captivated by an unknown hero? Who knows he might be an enemy? And let's not forget how Tsunade is sooo captivated by the “MC” And let's not forget why MC and his enemies all their abilities weakness and strengths while in battle??? And let's not forget why would nagato give up so easily and even give his rinnegan? He's not that stupid Don't delete this! This is an honest review that I am warning people, that this is heavily influenced on Chinese so be warned

¿Qué tiene que ver eso con la revisión? Ya lo sé. (What does that have to do with the review? I already know that?)

Can you rewrite this? it has a good idea 💡

We're have you been? it's been 21 days! TFTC!

“good is grammar 👍”

I don't remember any ninjas having any invincibility jutsus?

I actually saw a part when kakashi was in the Hokage building being the Hokage i saw a computer in his desk

I've read upto 103 chapters and there's no harem yet or maybe there will be no harem but it's a good choice for a Naruto fanfics with a smart mc inventing jutsus and stuff

Honestly it's one of the MHA fanfics out there, i honestly like how the author is going with mechamaru's personality and his friendship with shigaraki although the story is a bit rushed but author did warm is in the synopsis so I'm fine