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  • Asurathoth
    Asurathoth6 hours ago
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    That broke the flow right at the beginning, he should have kicked Black Cat away, also kicked any other girls he had dated or been with and moved on. Wade could have guaranteed Peter a very good amount of money, enough for him to live for a few good years without worries, along with a travel guide with several tickets already purchased for different countries and it would be good enough for Peter to maybe be able to heal on the trip. Guaranteeing him about three years of traveling through different cities in different countries, after the end he could return to the USA, but he would not return to New York but instead go to another state to focus on his future (preferably the most peaceful state, without superheroes, antiheroes or super villains). Peter is smart, when he leaves the Spider-Man character, he could use some of the money he got from Wade to invest or even start his own company, nothing too flashy, just a small company with good profits and he could become a millionaire too. After that he could find someone he likes, preferably a common girl or a goddess who happens to live in disguise in the human world. Of course, if it's a harem, he could bring back the girls he's dated or hooked up with, but I don't think it's worth it, after all, most of them have already cheated on him even with his 'friends'(i think).

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    Asurathoth11 hours ago
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    ●●●●● this comment is a continuation of my first comment, therefore, CONTAINS SPOILERS, read at your own risk ●●●●● In future chapters, he even gave the Zixia Magic Skill kung fu technique that he got through the chat group to personal trainer Smith and is thinking about selling it to the gym owner for 'one hundred billion'. By the way, since when does a gym owner have that much money? Unless the translation is misleading me. I just find this type of behavior problematic because it is very easy to take this technique from the personal trainer and the gym owner through interrogation, torture, threats, theft and even mind reading. Not to mention that if this type of technique ends up in the hands of geniuses in practice like Daredevil, Captain America, Elektra, Shang-Chi and Iron Fist or in the hands of a genius of creation/invention like Iron Man, Mister Fantastic and others, it could become something problematic for him in the future. Reed could create some technological gadget that would negatively affect in different ways directly through the interior of the body of those who practiced the technique by making the energy completely revolt. Shang-Chi and Iron Fist are already geniuses in martial arts and chi practice, by putting this kind of technique in their hands, it could probably lead them to create their own techniques based on the style of techniques from the Yue Buqun world and spread them throughout the Marvel world. Just imagining it makes my head hurt. ■ Just look at this possibility; The Hand ninjas are all practicing the 'Hand Demon Magic Skill' which is a type of internal energy kung fu technique that was created by the organization's five fingers based on the Zixia Magic Skill, only the internal energy they generate also has traces of the chi energy and the dimensional demon energy that the Hand worships. This alone makes the technique much stronger than 99% of the techniques created, after all, the members of the Hand, especially the five founders, have had chi for over a hundred years, thus being able to convert the chi together with the energy of the dimensional demon into the 'energy of the demonic hand'(the energy of the dimensional demon that they worship has a quality far above more than 99% of the energies in the universe). ■ Hand Demon Magic Skill generates; 'energy of the demonic hand' or 'demon hand qi' which is composed of 'chi' (95%) and 'energy of the dimensional demon' (5%). 1,000 points of chi (+?) = 1 (- ?) point of energy of the dimensional demon

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    Asurathoth13 hours ago
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    I think this protagonist is very fearless, arrogant, short-sighted and a dreamer. He gave up studying when he could use studying as 'exercise' to raise his intelligence and wisdom as a whole. He is completely obsessed with power and violence, so all he wants is to raise his physical fitness to a level where he will be treated by everyone as 'a god walking on Earth' and when he gets there he 'can do whatever he wants' without anyone bothering him or telling him otherwise. I wouldn't say anything if it were an ordinary world, but it is very delusional for him to think about this kind of thing when he ended up in the Marvel world with all kinds of incomprehensible things and beings everywhere. No matter how strong his physical fitness is, when someone who can alter/distort/manipulate reality comes to him, changing his reality with the intention of making his physical fitness the way it was before he started 'training', everything he has achieved will go down the drain and he can only pray to survive from then on. I read up to chapter twenty here, then i went to read the next chapter(21) of the original work and i can say that i didn't like it very much. After all, anyone who has read up to chapter twenty can already tell by the protagonist's actions and thoughts that he has had since the moment he 'wake up' that he seems to be on the right track to becoming something close to Marvel's Homelander(maybe not quite). Of course, i can't imagine him doing well like that in a crazy world like Marvel and i believe that he probably wouldn't last even a month if he tried. If they realized his true personality, character, worldview and goals, together with the absurdly high growth in physical fitness in a short period of time, he would probably have no peace at all and would only be left to be locked in a laboratory for the rest of his life or killed directly to avoid future problems. Not to mention that the author emphasized the protagonist's 'beauty' countless times, so it is already clear that his 'beauty' will cause problems and yet he has no interest in diminishing it or obscuring it in any way. Therefore, it is obvious that something would happen in the bank robbery situation(cph20/21) that would put him in everyone's sight, together with the fact that he was unable to control himself in any way and therefore it is obvious that shit would go wrong. As far as i know, at least until the chapter i read, he also has no mental defenses, so it is impossible to avoid telepaths, such as the White Queen from Hellfire or Professor X from the X-Men, although he himself is not a mutant and perhaps does not need to worry about that. In chapter 21 that i read in the original work, one of the many robbers noticed that the protagonist had not shown fear at any point during the bank robbery, that he did not take them seriously, that he was impatient and bored even though he had been taken hostage. Because of this, the robber did not like it and tried to get a hold of him only for him to then kill all the robbers with his fists to the point where several of their skulls exploded. Soon after the act, he returned to the cashier with the money, opened an account, deposited the money, left the bank with blood all over his shirt, told the police that 'it was over' and that he had killed all the robbers in 'self-defense'. A normal human, even a 'fitness enthusiast' as he identified himself, would not be able to make a human fly for about 4 to 5 meters(+) right after punching them or blowing up a human's skull with such ease in any way and that's why from now on he will probably be considered a mutant or something relative. He will be watched at all times, investigated or even arrested and they would certainly discover all his steps so far. Not forgetting that even the gym's personal trainer noticed how strange he is because of the rapid increase instrength and the abnormal resistance he has and that he didn't bother to hide.

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    Asurathoth15 hours ago
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    'a god walking on earth' Of course it had to be the idea of ​​a chinese author, a stupid idea to have relying only on physical fitness in a world where there are superheroes, anti-heroes, villains, gods, demons, extradimensional entities, cosmic entities, abstract entities, conceptual entities and even a being with the three O's. Probable death or eternal torture being a toy in the hands of some of these. Just remember that there are many beings with the power to distort, manipulate and alter reality itself. What is he going to do about it? Raise his fist and punch? He's not Saitama.

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    Asurathoth16 hours ago
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    The idiot spent money going to the gym for nothing. Everything he has done so far could have been done without a personal trainer and without the need for a gym. He just had to try some of the exercises that are available for free on the internet. After all, he knew that he could heal himself even if he got hurt by doing the wrong movements. He 'dropped out' of school(not yet) unnecessarily because studying in essence can also be considered an exercise that would help him improve his intelligence, reasoning, memory, and so on. Remember that he does not seem to be rich, so it would be convenient to continue studying while finding ways to earn a good amount of money(preferably legal) so that in the future he can create a unique training space for himself. After all, he will end up needing it if he does not want others to see how strange he is when running around the city at such a fast speed that he creates a whirlwind in the process and that, oddly enough, he never gets tired. If he focuses on improving his intelligence, he could take a risk in the future by trying to create some very unique training equipment with weight adjustment ranging from 10 kg to 100 tons or more, a gravitational camera and so on because he will probably need it. Of course, or he could follow the cliché and find Tony Stark to solve the need for training equipment and wait for Tony to be kidnapped so he can make money by buying and selling shares in his company. Not to mention that it is quite risky, because others could start to notice his abnormal stamina over time if he ignores the presence of other people while he is focused on exercises that will soon become quite unrealistic for 'normal' humans to do.

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    Asurathoth17 hours ago
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    The author could have changed the protagonist's 'nickname' in the chat group and made the other time traveler discover that the protagonist is also a time traveler in some other way. I can't say, this nickname was pretty awful and the fact that the nickname was chosen just because the protagonist said a few words without opening the group chat is already a negative point. For example, the chat group administrator could have two functions unique to the position he holds; ■ [1] WORLD ANALYSIS: ▪︎ The administrator can analyze the basic information of the group members' home world and the chat can also do a 'digital' search in a matter of milliseconds in the administrator's world to find out if there is any 'story' about the group members' worlds. ■ [2] HIDDEN INFORMATION: ▪︎ The administrator can 'see' hidden information of the group members and the protagonist's hidden information is; • The origin is 'Planet Earth', which he is currently on 'Planet Earth/C-53/Midgard', which he is biologically 18 years old and spiritually 38 years old(assuming he died at age 20). Therefore, the author could have changed/made the administrator/time traveler banish the protagonist because he realized through these two functions that the protagonist was also a time traveler.

  • Asurathoth
    Asurathoth2 days ago
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    Idiot. This is the kind of conversation that should never be had and words that should never be said. Especially if the conversation is with an artificial intelligence in a world where technology is extremely absurd, AIs become genocidal, several beings have super hearing, many can read minds and others watch everything that happens from a mirror dimension without anyone noticing.

  • Asurathoth
    Asurathoth2 days ago
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    I agree, but there's so much nonsense in this novel that I've stopped caring. He doesn't even seem to have gone to Marvel, he seems to have gone to an urban parallel world with nothing special about him other than the watch on his wrist and everything that comes from that. If this is the MCU, Stark must have already created Jarvis, Shuri in Wakanda probably already has a good understanding of artificial intelligence and there's also Zola from Hydra. Like it or not, he would draw these people's attention. There's no way he could 'go quietly' all the way to where he is now and get everything he currently has in a matter of days. Others would definitely come after him, either to try to control him or profit from what he created. Of course, he's basically become a 'Ben Tennyson' at this point, so i wouldn't find it strange if he had the 'protagonist halo' of the 'real Ben' too, so everything works out in the end and no one really cares how outrageous the things he does might be.

  • Asurathoth
    Asurathoth2 days ago
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    'I do my best to become Ben Tennyson in the MCU' Omnitrix, name, clothes, etc. 🤦🏻‍♂️ The author could very well guarantee the ability to keep the artifact invisible, turn it into a tattoo or even have the artifact in his soul or spiritual consciousness. The problem is the inability to think, imagine and create new plots that do not include the cliché of discovering/realizing that he carries every day and at all times a strange green 'futuristic' watch on his wrist that by 'coincidence' has the same symbol that certain aliens have and that are being seen frequently. The difference between 'transforming directly with a thought' and 'turning the top of the strange watch a few times, pressing and transforming' are absurdly glaring. After all, the first is inexplicable to a certain extent, and something can only be attempted through the study, understanding and analysis of DNA. Therefore, it can be considered safe to a certain extent and will not cause 'many' problems. However, the second is naturally extremely dangerous, because no one would ever willingly accept the fact that a teenager carries with him an artifact that allows him to transform into different races with incredible powers through the watch on his wrist. Of course, the biggest problem is that the artifact itself is external force, so it naturally 'can' be taken away from him and placed in 'safe hands' for better handling. It doesn't seem to be too difficult for the protagonist to create some gadget to make the watch invisible.