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2nd Update (10-20) I almost have no free time so ill say what i believe in 2 words: Fun, Enjoyable
1st Update (1-10): So far its enjoyable, I believe Toji is well done (I expected it from Toji's Husband). Its a good start.
Not gonna say its a bad thing tho, actually I hope it happens more in the future
I was reading this, and this chapter just spawned from nowhere 🗿
Bro, no way you just said that (Facts tho)
I know nothing about Sakamoto days, but Ill trust this fic as well, because you made it. Ill update this review every 10 chapters giving my general opinion on this fic.
I usually dont review stuff, but after finally having the free time to read the last 5 chapters , I can only say 1 thing. THIS IS PEAK.
The first chapter was enough to turn me off; the protagonist receives everything he needs without effort, and the writing quality is poor.
Frankly, I feel that this history would be stronger without a harem. A harem is something complicated to execute correctly and can negatively impact the story if misused. There are cases where the story has a well-executed harem, but they are few. In many cases, it is used by less experienced writers who are not proficient in romance to avoid it and instead focus more on the main storyline, which is not necessarily negative. Additionally, it's important to consider that there is a portion of people on 'WebNovel' who dislike the harem tag. I must admit that I am one of them. As a final point, in the event that you do decide to make it a harem, please do so sparingly. Some people overdo it, large harems can make character development difficult.