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Its my first book so its pretty rushed im throughly planning for a new one which i hope is better than this one .................................

thank you for the review the characters not being introduced is cause i want to keep an air of mystery around them.

could you please review my book and please be as honest as possible

good development and also slow paced is good but make sure not to make it to slow paced and also make sure to describe the world background more specifically and update frequently all in all very good