Draken_blitz

There's alot of exposition in these first couple of chapters like 3 of the 5 chapters are just exposion and I can see that this is part of world building but its a bit much to be put right in the beginning of the story not to mention how much of this info will be used in future chapters if its little bits of it then theres no reason to go so indepth but and if not do the exposition when you need it. It's not that I'm not enjoying it I'm just saying it may be too much

so she knows about legelimancy but can only remember 3 characters?

Ayo peter's in trouble

then why tf is he giving books away. "Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead." –Benjamin Franklin so just obliviate them and be done with it. forbiden plants are one thing but an entire library that may or may not contain dark arts given to you by Grindleward should not be accessed by anyone other than yourself like wtf

Honestly wish you were stingy

HE BECAME A SHINIGAMI!?!?!?!

shinjutsu are techniques beyond any jutsu like kaguya's all killing ash bones they are jutsu only 'gods' likes otsutsuki can use

Hmm, now where have I heard this before?

They dont have destroyed coils, cause if they did the gates would probably do much worse damage to them then they already do

me when a girl is 10 cm around me