Moonflower414
A newbie. (I shine only with the light you gave me~) Contact me on discord. Id: Moonflower414 You can call me MingMing. ><🤍
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Moonflower4147 days ago發表- Moonflower4147 days ago發表
Finally we're gonna know something about master!!
- Moonflower41411 days ago發表
indeed. history is written by the one who rules after all.
- Moonflower414a month ago發表
Review time: read about 42 chaps Writing Quality Simple, not too complicated but random errors at certain paragraphs. the sudden transition from first to second to third pov is kinda getting on my nerves ig? welp Story Development It has a good pace. Not too slow, nor too fast. But a few of the chapters could use Abit slow progression. Character Design Pretty Good. A villain that's a villain and not a maniac.The actions are justified and i can tell, the og protagonist is meh. Like this take. Pretty addictive. Updating Stability This book is on hiatus but I remember it had 7 chaps a week schedule so not bad. World Background well, it's a so so situation. We learn about the world along side the MCEee but apart from that it's set in modern world so not hard to navigate Over all An addictive book.Just give the first 5 chaps a try and it gets better from there. One of the Good Villain books. Definitely Recommend!
- Moonflower414a month ago發表
Fang Yu you mean ?
