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3rd review so far and the story is going good , love how human the character seems , love how he takes a bit of time before completely adopting to the new world he is now in , yes bro seems to be overpowered no way around it lol , 😂 chapter 15 and his already facing off with the bold women 🤏🏿 that’s a hint lol , I’m not gonna spoil anything, love how cool the chapter acts 😂yea I just love him man , reminds me of the alternate version of me lol . The story’s pace is very good , love how the conversation are not cringe and always there if necessary

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This was good , yep it was longer but could you plz make it more longer 🤣

13 chapters in and again I have to say , this book is getting better and better, love the character and how he doesn’t easily forget his passed like some characters of some novels , love the ways he acts for now , love how real he feels and yes for now it’s good so it’s still a 5 star for me , I don’t see any mistakes when it comes to pronunciation or sentences, easy to understand and very interactive , it doesn’t make me wanna fall asleep , and I love the aspect of mixing both mutants and the marvel superhero’s into one world it has too much potential 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 It’s really good

😭😭😭 I need more

Honestly I did expect this much lol 🤣 Like bro u have a reputation, I love all your work bro this includes the other book u are also working on , so when u said u are doing a fanfic I was really surprised and happy, the book is obviously amazing as it has a good element of emotion and depth, lol this book also starts with a tragic death , just like the last book of yours u put a lot of emotions into the character like u are the character himself 😮‍💨 it’s truly amazing and a breath of fresh air , u should consider making an actual full book , but it’s cool , anyone who is reading the comments before going into the book , although I have only read 10 chapters i can truly say from the author previous book that it’s going to be amazing and I can’t wait to see how it turns out lol 😭

Yea bro that is what I was thinking , bro is currently working on two books 🤣 but I won’t stop him from writing , I love them , yo dusk need more chapters 😭 bless me

😭this is good 🧐I think lol, but keep them chapters coming , and plz u should also upload on you other book , the one with asha the son of hades , I have really been looking forward to that one , but this one is also really good I think 🤣