LuciferTheDevil767
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LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zadokay, i will
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nah you're doing good. it's i who need to improve.
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zado
ahh, i see...damn this helps a lot, thanks mate
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zado
i meant that as in 'when is the winter getting over?'
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zado
Hmm, I think you should have added a bit more reaction in the part where the Mc gets reincarnated...like it felt as if he accepted everything a bit too quickly
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zado
I read the first chapter after that i had to go for dinner😅
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 Hien_zado
I see...i'll try to improve♥
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago回復 steeve
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In the beginning, God created the heavens and the earth. The earth was without form, and void; and darkness was on the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the face of the waters. Then God said, "LET BRO COOK" 🗣🔥🔥🔥
該書已被刪除。 - LuciferTheDevil7677 months ago回復 raja_kaleem
no more what?
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