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Don't get why he's so hostile towards a naive and confused little girl, seems unnecessary and out of nowhere

I read authors other work and loved it, but five chapters into this one and my mind is breaking. They are like night and day quality wise... Was this your first work, and the quality goes up later? If so at which chapter does the writing quality improve.

Unless it is the first time with a particular woman I'd prefer shortening it, just because it's a little annoying to waste days worth of chapters on one scene, since the main thing we are here for is story progression, and some stories essentially get paused for a whole week because of a single sex scene which can get annoying at times. It's all about balance, if you decide to post ten cheaper sex scenes that's fine as long as it's bonus chapters that don't take away from the actual story moving forward.

I get why you use those names, but it honestly make the reading experience worse because we have no clue what they are saying with cross-reference constantly

why make names needlessly complicated

Don't give him a defensive ability if you just ignore it every time he fights

This guy really don't wanna use his shield ability huh?

So no explanation to how many attributes per level? Seemed pretty insignificant to me, if you didn't type wrong it's like 2 per level

you're killing me here.... I need the next chapter asap 😭

Still dragging the relationship between them out. I hate that I have to drop this, but I have no patience to wait 3 years for them to finally do it an be done with it. Sad to drop a story I otherwise really liked.