Ypsilanti

Looks good. It's clear that you are not a beginner alike me, your writing style is good and clean, and the story has a potential. I hope you will continue writing, you doing great.

Although I’m going to be honest, kinda like the setting sun more

12 AHs out of 10

I'm not trying to put you down or something, but your story would be much greater to read if you'd shown it to a few friends of yours for checking grammar and stuff. And try to not overusing words or descriptions of dialogues Polin says "XY" Lenin says "XY" Polin angry responds "XY" and etc. is basic, but you could do better.

Who's Polin? The Angel of the worldwide communist revolution?

Skill issue, was never kicked for sleeping in my life

relatable

Greetings, my beloved reader! This here is my first-ever work that I decided to publish. I know it’s not perfect, I know it lacks details in some places and in other ones it has too many details. I know my writing style may look weird because of my lack of experience, but this is why I got you! Please keep writing stuff down, rating and reviewing this novel, commenting on the parts you liked or disliked in the novel itself. Please let me know where I have to improve myself! I hope this journey will not end soon and that I can entertain you, at least a bit. Take care of yourselves, your families and stay healthy! Bis dann, αγάπες μου!

No, it's not. Smoking is bad. 🚬🗿

same.