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update please
it looks like an essay, filled with information no one asked for.
Story is pretty good, but the grammar is garbage. please use a qualified editor. And regular update would be much appreciated.
update please 🥺
Story has great potential. just make it a little more fast-paced.
painfully slow paced....................
interesting story ......................
slow paced..............................
update please