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Here are my thoughts on this scenario First of all hyenas do not feed on lion or it cubs, the only time something like this will happen is if there are no more prey which with your earlier description there is an ambulance of prey. Second, hyenas might not be intelligence but they are hunters, they are capable of ascertaining a situation and making a decision on the risk of a hunt which in this case with the adult not being far away is equivalent to suicide. They only hunt if they want to feed and a lion cub will not be able to satisfy there hunger at all. Third, almost all the characteristics and behaviours of the different animals you wrote about is wrong. I understand that this is a fantasy novel but if you are going to write based on lions, it environment and the animals it interact with you should do your research instead of writing based on two or three videos you watched on national geographic. Honestly I love the concept you are writing base on and can't wait to see you improve No shades 😎

PEAK !!! I REPEAT PEAK !!! This chapter was amazing thanks for the chapter

it doesn't make sense, why not just text her directly instead of sending him there

The novel was heavily inspired by ashes of the deep sea(also called deep sea ember on other reading platform) similar world world background with ashes of deep sea. A very lovely read 100% recommend

Yes !!!!!!! finally Thank you for the chapter

This novel has been very good so far, from character having dept to amazing world background and very good story development. The book has long suppress my expectations. A must read But for sometime now the author has not updated the novel and I am scared he has abandoned the novel. Please author don't give up on the novel, it hard to see quality novel like this on webnovel. At some point your novel was the only reason I opened this app

amazingly beautiful love your writing style

Sure I will give it a try

Yeah l do study the gospel, not as much as I Would like. And free fall is it really good ??

After reading this I don't think I am capable of reading another novel again. This novel just created a standard, final caught up with the novel after 2 weeks of reading. The novel is so good that it feels miserable having to wait everyday for new chapters. pls can anyone recommend another novel like this.