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RecursiveDescent

RecursiveDescent

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Love dragons and isekai. New to writing, hope every story makes me better.

2023-12-18 加入United States
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8.5h

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  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescent5 months ago
    回復 Buzz_The_Buzzer

    Unfortunately I wasted the whole first part doing almost nothing and it took like 20 chapters to finally commit to a real plot, so combined with how bad the beginning looks and just my overall style of writing no one really reads it to the point the only reason I even keep going is because I can't stand leaving it in a despicable limbo of never being finished. By the time I had a plan it was too late. I can tell you from statistics most people see how bad chapter 1 looks and stop reading right away.

  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescent10 months ago
    發表

    Perfect grammar and am interesting enough start for a tower story.

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  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescent10 months ago
    回復 MarAuthor

    Yeah I'm going for a more 'normal' kinda obsession relationship that I think many kids would develop if they discover their new family is a giant cuddle monster.Though you should try to avoid using swears in reviews because WN seems to filter them. I only know this review exists because I was curious about who made it on the list of fans, it's not listed on the novel itself and I never got a notification for it.My main issue is that I rushed too much and didn't describe enough since I tend to omit details I consider irrelevant.

  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescent10 months ago
    回復 ghost750x1

    Yeah I'm trying to slow down in later chapters and get out of the habit of omitting whatever I don't consider relevant to story.But as for human language it's briefly mentioned that she was able to use memory of past dragons for basic understanding and was taught from there.

  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescenta year ago
    發表

    Aside from some misspellings and minor grammar issues the story is actually decent so far

  • RecursiveDescent
    RecursiveDescenta year ago
    發表

    I'll keep track of this to see how the plot will improve. There isn't much info yet to compile a meaningful review.The grammar is acceptable, but there are a couple typos and places where the flow of the words could be better.The way the MC was put into the world was a little too abrupt as well, even for isekai standards.These can be compensated for if the plot turns out good.

    該書已被刪除。

Reincarnated as an Orphaned Dragon!

Facing the imminent danger of a demon invasion, the Prazia kingdom establishes orphanages to uncover hidden talents among its populace. Lena, now known as Lava, is reincarnated as a dragon and becomes an orphan after her mother goes missing. However, not every fantasy world is filled with raw plot armor. Reality can be difficult, and Lava is not immune to being a pawn in the plans of others. Features a unique word-based magic system, no skills or levels. ----- Sorry for how slow burning and random the beginning chapters are, I just kind of made up plausible nonsense to keep the story flowing. It wasn't until about ch.23 where inspiration struck and the story really started to pick up speed. The main reason things started so slow is that I don't like writing highly unlikely events to drive plot like an mc saving someone that just happens to be a noble. Keep in mind this has a more realistic theme than most isekai stories, even with power mc is not untouchable and actually has to make difficult choices. Sometimes, reality can be dark. It's also not a wake up as a dragon and then fight endless monsters kind of story either, I felt that was already done too many times and chose to go for a more intrigue and life themed story. This is my first work, and I think it's rather good for a first story. Trying to develop my writing style on this. First chapters might come off as kind of rushed, I didn't spend much time on backstory and what happened to her mother I just kind of rushed mc to her new family and that really came back on me later on in the story. Cover is AI generated (Except for the title)

RecursiveDescent · 奇幻
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