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really? would that not make his body very weak?
can law also transer DNA? take the DNA of king lunarian and give it to basire
its been 300+ and i want to know before i start, please?
who is the love interest??????? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its great, a bit slow start but picks up quickly, great translation, the MC is interesting, takes no BS no prisoners i hope it continiues...
Its great, one of the best fanfics imp. The translting is lacking in some aspects, nothing to bad or anything that will ruin the experience but some terms appear that is not well translated like aunt, or lozai but few.
Interesting concept, the system is good, i like the timer, and the world building is far more intriguing that i thought it would be. I hope you keep it up
Speedstars are my favorite, i love the interaction he has with avengers, i cant wait to see Iris reaction when she realizes she is replaced,
I dont know if this is original or translation but the grammar is amazing, the mc is likeable and good talker, i hope he will be more interesting than other fics where they just follow plot
Make whitebeard great again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do we get to see them involved in ohara, maybe adobt robin?