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not bad.but the MC is too excisted,he just follow the target law thinking,he just jump jump like a monkey in every duty.he has no assassin ethick atall
what I hate about this kind of book is.the MC does not think about the main world anymore
I don't like mc world view.or are you making this novel to please your self
very good novel.give us more chapter boss
good book.but you write many unnecessary things that make the story look bad
I don't like your work the system make the host it's slave.i think it even want to control his toilet schedule,
just a jock story.the story have no spiritual at all
more chapter.the book is good with perfect idea
I just don't like it poor development of the plot,nationalism you have 1book but ask for pay