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and if i remember you drop, so i hope you don't drop this time
i think i see this before, are you the author of the ancient novel ?
2 chapter so my review is not objective, but cool. Even if the synopsis remind me my dnd campaign so i start with a good mood
A story without harem, wonderfull. it's beautifull. Thank you author
Good, but maybe 3 wish are too much. i think he can be nerf without beeing useless. Only the wish for technologie can be usefull, he can use science for make his own wish reality, now even without all this wish he can be the most powerfull beeing with adaptation. And this seem not to be MCU, but just an AU Marvel. The personality of personnage seem pretty good, and the story seem to have potential. (my review is only about 7 first chapter )
A very good story, a chakra théorie interesting and complex but even good slice of life. For now the fight are simple and he only enter in the academy, so my review is only about 21 chapters
yeah it's a great fan fic even if i never seen the end because a lack of translation
the personality of MC become worse with the time. i think the author want MC slept with every caracter before the end, and make the développement of the relations with female caracter quick.
2 chapter, but seem to have potential. No error of name, and the personality of MC is for now good. but with only 2 chapter and one word count i can't make an objective review