kevin_gauntlet

Oh hey wow, i just saw your question. I never really checked the notifications. First question: Yeah, Mina is a romantic interest and I am developing their story and attraction. Second question: As for the wooden board, he only felt the shock or the hit, he didn't receive any pain or damage. He was drunk and wasn't expecting that cheap shot even with the force field, which by that point was getting weaker. I guess the narration was a tad bit unreliable. I apologize. Frizz feels and knows he is getting hit but doesn't receive the damage. Like getting hit by a pillow behind several layers of clothing.

changed the health, there was an error

nothing like that as of now, I'll probably make one soon

Did multiple changes to this one.

removed "next morning" for consistency.

His keys were stolen but he still has a spare, I guess I forgot to include that.

Yes, thank you.

I remember reading back this, it was a good read. Very nice, I am planning to re read it back. This story kept me up through college, it really is a good read.

Biased review, since I am the author Also, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.

I see the potential, somewhat.