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Lonelythree

Lonelythree

Lv4

Just a lonely soul wandering around to find some meaning

2023-11-19 加入Global
155d

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  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 days ago
    回復 Joey_Walker_1377

    Your point is right. The fact I planned to finish this within 300 but my editor wanted me to stretch around a bit. Also, if I finish in October I won't be earning until the next book which I will release in January.And you might not feel it but book is almost ending.Two three major arcs with few minor and it's done.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythreea month ago
    回復 Ultimate_Origin00

    You are right about it...At first, I thought the same after that is the most practical approach but here is the thing.First about Jay's father, is from an education business. In such cases, you don't see much competition cause no matter how many seats they give it's not enough and will they have a limit. Now leaving all these things, think like this..What if the opponent didn't want to get rid of competitors.The human mind and greed are complex. Instead of getting rid of the enemy they might shake hands and eliminate Evan or the enemy might fear since Evan can find all this for others it can do the same for him so it's an unnecessary risk.But in case of Jay father he can threaten all he want and then use this leverage.Yes, the other party might try to eliminate him but that's why he hired guards isn't it?And as for future he will only grow. Also, development is slow because I made it.Mc isn't an anti hero here and since it's modern world it's good to change mindset slowly rather than make drastic changes within 100 chapters.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythreea month ago
    回復 Ankit_Bhanot

    I understand your point. It's annoying but it's crucial as it is the preparation for a sequel. There will be a sequel to this story later following Evan achievement.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 SkillsMasterAkurai

    I think this was one was used correct.the other you pointed was mistake.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 AlexPendragon

    I got your point and in fact I already on it but you see the first 30 chapters were actually 17 chapters of length 1.5k-2k but I broke it cause as a contracted author I learnt that readers prefer short 1k chapter so split it. So up to 30 it would be short chapter but the chapters after would be long from 2k-3k.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 MustafaMahmood

    First, I want to try Patron. Second, I already have two ongoing contracted stories on webnovel, and believe me, writing daily is cumbersome, especially for students. I plan to use Patron and try my luck while not having force myself to write daily

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 AlexPendragon

    Can't agree more.Hate those things

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 TheprimordialGod

    The premise had been picked. Also, the names of girls and children in the first few chapters but it's not a translation. As for initial idea where a I took, it was something about Villains having more children or something that I came by chance. Dont remember the full name as those mtl had weird names

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 AlexPendragon

    The premise had been picked. Also, the names of girls and children in the first few chapters but it's not a translation. The reason it's in this section because it's also on the RR but not doing well.

  • Lonelythree
    Lonelythree2 months ago
    回復 Joey_Walker_1377

    Son of Biswas, the owner of University he studied who threatened him at first.

Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both

Was he a pawn or would he reach the end of the board and flip it over? ............. At the age of 5, Leon's parents were slaughtered in front of him, but instead of getting arrested and punished, the case was closed off, with the villains of the incident running free. At the age of 24, he had turned into a mass murderer crazy psychopath. After sending many criminals to hell, he finally got his revenge and killed the people responsible for his parents' deaths. However, instead of finding solace, what he felt was never-ending emptiness making him lose his will to stay alive. Surrounded by cops, instead of struggling he leapt off the building deciding to end his life. Alas, fate played another joke on him. He was selected by Deity and was sent to a world filled with protagonists and antagonists of urban cultivation novels. And to his utter dismay, when he woke up he found himself in the body of trash fucked by fate brutally. His mother divorced his father and remarried. His fiancee was taken away by another one. A girl whom he fell in love with later turned out to be his step-sister and engaged with someone else. His stepmother had thrown him out of the house and blocked his cards. Recounting all the bullshit, Leon finally lost his sanity. "Screw you all and Screw the world." "I wanted to have peace but since you are not going to let me in peace, you will see my dark side." Follow Leon's journey as he tramples over the so-called childrens of heaven and destiny villains, and strives to the top of the world. ................ .......... I am a complete novice. My English sucks still I will try my best. However, despite all the flaws, I hope you can give it a try.

Lonelythree · 奇幻
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400 Chs