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Good work author . Don't let negative reviews get over your head . I tried writing a story once and failed miserably . Those people who talk bad don't know how hard it is . Keep up the good work buddy , adversity always gives opportunity for introspection .
Author-san just tell me one thing . Is his mother pure evil ? Is he gonna be betrayed again by whom he thinks as his closest ? If so I don't think i have the heart to continue anymore . My heart's not a masochist .
few chapters in and i feel that the author and readers of this novel should have a serious psychological check-up . Though I know that some people just love dark novel and I as not a lover of those types of things am none to judge . Which is why i am giving it a 4star as the novel context is something i don't like and i should haven't read it farther after the 1st chapter . Still I seriously think y'all should have a psychological check-up , I mean this ain't normal
If there would have been a vomit emoji that would have been my review . Fucking no backbone mc It's not character development it's character shitlopment 5 stars so the incompetent( maybe impotent too) author doesn't delete it In reality giving it (-5) stars will be showing kindness . Shitty novel shah...thu thu
Worst novel ever . Rape #1 No self-esteem #2 No moral #3 Things of people as objects #4 No respect for his partners #5 The first two , he cares about them maybe idk but when they couldn't keep up in bed no they were just tired he thought immediately I need more cum dustbins . Mentally sick author #6 Go ahead delete this review , I can assure you 126 people from my office will give a 1 star review right after And if you delete them too we will report it and keep giving those same reviews right after and after let's see how many you delete All these I said because I heard from some people that you were deleting reviews which I hate the most . Let's see what happens or till the extreme is where we go .
Damn I can bey you are retarded .
bad very bad very very bad so bad so so bad so so fucking bad i just didn't like the story development and its boring too so yeah you aren't gonna like it that much if you have read like 200+ novels but if you are a novice then i don't know
yo my fellow indian buddy
good JOB
okay so basically i literally read 3 of your stories and they are great for a harem fan like me . Also this story is going awesome i literally love everything and every-shit that's in there (200 chapters in ) i hope you keep tian overpowered cuz in many novels at first mc is overpowered and then gets nerfed afterwards when they go to higher realms i hope you don't do that and yeah please break the fourth wall more often i loved that in that douluo dalu fanfic ( and idk why you stopped writing it :( ...) whatever keep going on fellow man of culture . also more MILFs please