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IN DC VERSE : BLOODBATH yesss dc and murder

bro forgot that 'K'😂😂😂

carnage is like he gathered all junk and garbage to build his body like look at his body its like something will fall from there and its not even sharp of a weapon don’t know why they they made carnage like that

in movie peter parker's hand hair stood in one scene so yeah he have spider sense and all spider sense has that its an inherent ability of spider-men

writing quality is good but sometimes it’s hard to visualize but ok👍 story development if i have to say its mid (as its a fanfic) character design is good(i am talking about our mc)world background its..........a pass as its a fanfic but overall is good if have to say better than some cringe novel/fanfic i enjoyed it but i hoped it was on continue🙂but its completed and many people are talking about shadow spiderman guess they didn’t read till 70 chapter well spider noir was that but i think it was mentioned only 1 time on chapter or 2 then it stopped ~~~~

It's a nice fanfic and i enjoy it reading but if u give many ability like which cant be synergise together then it will become boring i read until chapter 47 but its becoming a bit boring and man give other heroes some spotlight bruh It's becoming like those cringy chinese novel

author don’t keep us cliff hanging.Grant us with your next few chapter[img=update]

mobile casted magic spell : light explosion 🤣🤣🤣

info dumping is more than main story and need some romantic or (R18) or surprise element. overall for under 18 it is a wonderful story.

Sometimes it was tough for me to understand some statement(because it was like someone used the wrong charger on wrong phone) inspite of that the web novel is a mixture of everything i like it. I hope author will continue,thanks....