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SirBobthe_1st

SirBobthe_1st

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2023-10-04 加入Global
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  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1sta month ago
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    Give me a extra chapter please and thanks

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1sta month ago
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    Good idea and concept and the writing is pretty good from what you expect for a fanfic. Updating is top notch and the background is pretty interesting. My only huge problem with this is age, like man or women idk who reading this idc if there’s harem or romance but, you want to know how old they are if there all the same age as Harry Potter, 11 so sexualizing characters at that age is just wrong and messed go watch the 1st movie and just look. Oh and last thing author seems to repeat frazes and that kinda gets old

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1sta month ago
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    I have a question I see the harem tag I don’t usually like harem and but since this is in the Hxh I feel like there aren’t that many options so I want to read this can someone explain why this has harem and to what degree

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1sta month ago
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    Trash don’t waste your time. Good idea horrible writing. Inconsistent world rules. Inconsistent power levels. Bad plot.

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1st2 months ago
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    Great nov I hope the author continues I see potential

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    SirBobthe_1st2 months ago
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    This is not good. There are multiple problems but there are 3 that really stand out. First is the Mc is a horrible person and protagonist not only does his logic and morality not make any sense but he’s a asshole you can make a Mc a villain but he has no drive no soul. Second is the author holy shit is this guy stupid it’s as if he read starting as a class five mutant was like 👍 sounds nice and blatantly copied the premise then he goes into writing with no sense or past knowledge it’s as if all his knowledge of marvel is from fanfics honestly I would not be surprised if this is ai generated. But the worse part is the writing for example how does every person know what a omega mutant is and by the way gojo may be a class five mutant but he is not omega level by any standards, why did the Mc not just go to the big arc reactor instead of harassing tony and killing people in total the authors righting story telling and idea is copied. Third nothing makes sense in his marvel world not only do the characters seem flat as hell but so does the power system and everything else. The only good quality of this fanfic was the idea and title the only reason why I read this piece of shit

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1st2 months ago
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    Could fic this perhaps be dropped? For reason unknown to me

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1st2 months ago
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    Thank you very much

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    SirBobthe_1st2 months ago
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    So everything really good but quick question what’s the updating status is this dropped or slow or break pls someone let me know

  • SirBobthe_1st
    SirBobthe_1st3 months ago
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    I’m dropping this dogshit of a novel